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Tides rule the surface
There is a strange calm beneath;
Tides are not in the nature of water,
It is when drawn by an external force that water rises and falls.
But for that magnetic attraction towards the moon,
The ocean would've been a sailor's paradise.
Yes!! Left alone water shows its true colours..
Transparent, pure, subtle, calm and peaceful.
Left alone!!
There is a strange calm beneath;
Tides are not in the nature of water,
It is when drawn by an external force that water rises and falls.
But for that magnetic attraction towards the moon,
The ocean would've been a sailor's paradise.
Yes!! Left alone water shows its true colours..
Transparent, pure, subtle, calm and peaceful.
Left alone!!
4 comments:
wow..babe ur poetic skills are amazing..but why is ths poem called me....
hey glad u liked it. this was something i wrote eons ago.
i just wrote another one now... will put it up shortly..
regarding the title, the poem is not just talking abt water,but abt the hidden nature of me.. a more apt title would probably be like " My Soul"... do u think so?
good work, short and sweet. so ur tellin me, others govern what u do? or that ur just swayed by the forces at work around us? but then again aren't we all. P.S. change sutle to subtle. cheers.
Oops! Typing error.. Thanks for bringin' it to my notice..
And yes.. I myself did think about it.. its true of everybody, isn’t it.
So what do u say I shud change the title to .... ??
Maybe “The nature of human soul” or something more generalized?
Any suggestions there?
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